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 # Macintosh SE/30 Analog Board Schematic
 
-The original scan of this schematic wasn't great. It was very blurry and had a lot of artifacts on it, and the scan itself was in two pieces. I tidied it up a bit and combined the two original scans into one. It's still not super-legible, but I think it's a lot easier to understand than when it was in two pieces.
+The original scan of this schematic wasn't great. It was very blurry and had a lot of artifacts — and the scan itself was in two pieces. I tidied it up a bit and combined the two original scans into one. It's not perfect, but it's a lot easier to understand than it was.
 
 [![Macintosh SE or SE/30 Analog Board schematic diagram](Analog%20Board.png)](Analog%20Board.png)